This sentence… make sence? Help Please!?

I am writing an essay about the Odyssey. It is an epic poem about the greek gods and Odysseus. I don't know if my closing statement is correct. Can someone help out? Fast! IT IS DUE TOMORROW!"His bravery makes him a hero; his weaknesses make him epic."If it is incorrect does anyone have a good idea to end the essay!?

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3 Responses to “This sentence… make sence? Help Please!?”

  1. slipways says:

    I like it.

  2. prates says:

    that makes sense. but my english teacher always told me to end it more to make it seem like a conclusion, eg u could say, “In conclusion, it was his tremendous bravery which made him a hero. Despite his weaknesses he is still rendered ‘epic’ ” or something like that. just a word to close it off, like ‘in conclusion’, or ‘overall’, or ‘in the end’…..

  3. aluminish says:

    His weaknesses make him human. It is the conflict between his heroism and his weakness that make this, and other epics and sagas, readable for thousands of years.