Can Someone help me to Check this essay please…?!?





I'm a english student and my teacher wants me an essay about my own bedroom.please help me to check the wrong things in it.I know It's too long but please help me:Everyone bedroom shows their interests and so their culture so it's sometimes easy to guess some body's character,age,country,etc by seeing their bedroom_not particularly but for example you can see that a person who lives in a particular room is from West or East countries,and this is one of the bases of their culture._At first something that I really should tell about my bedroom to imagine it better is that the room was rather tanned with a touch of brown everywhere,the sofas,the bedspread,the curtains..all have a slight tint of brown!It has a five walls.near the white door of the room there is a light brown desk with a orange seat behind it.which was used to wrote on it because I have begun to make a 1500 piece puzzle that has covered all of the desk.Left part of that desk is a bookcase.There are many thick and fat in many colors in that,also i put my music Cd's next to the books.to the right of the door there is a very light brown closet.it's very big and tall.near the closet there is a bureau which is completely like the closet in color and design but shorte and smaller.these two are in 90 degrees with each other(is that expression that I've just used correct?)so in the corner of the room on the left there is nothing exept a small CD player.on that bureau there are some pictures of my self especially my childhood.with different frames.the farest thing from the door is the wooden bed in the 2/5 meters distance in front of it.It has light and dark checkerd pattern.the bed is next to the wall in front of the window so the window cannot be opened completely.near the bed there is a brown night table with two drawsers,and usually a book and a clock on it.on the window there is somthing like a curtain.actually It's a a shade,an orange one.with some diffrerent colored lines on it.on the wall next to the bed that window is on it, there is a brown-orange wallpaper.the room is full of warm but slight colors that makes it very comfortable.



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  1. laborem says:

    some spelling and capitalization.