Please check my essay? :D?





Computer as the next textbook in school for better learning. It is true enough that today, technology has proved its benefits in all spheres of life. As what we can see today, computers play a major role in the society especially in the fields of education. Information becomes simpler to teach because of the aid of computers. If the topic is supplemented with a well-designed and attractive interface, the readers become more interested, thus, resulting to greater readership. Through eye-catching pictures and animations, content looks livelier and attracts more attention. Information can be presented in many different ways, using computer-teaching makes student more than just browse the screen. It makes learning more interactive and interesting. Like textbooks, there’s lots of information available on the internet. Almost everything that the books covered is available online. Also, there is no restriction of information. You can search anything. With just one topic, there are lots of results available giving you wider research coverage. Plus information are updated almost everyday! A lot of paper is used in the making of textbooks. Now because of computers, information can be stored on it and save lots of paper and the environment. It also minimizes redundancy of information and promotes reuse. Textbooks come in edition, so when a new edition is comes out, some information is replaced and the others remain. With computers, you can edit that certain part. With erasable memories, you can just delete late editions and replace it with new ones. However, textbooks cannot be replaced. Some people still prefer them over computers. Still, in anyway and in any form of teaching, teachers are still irreplaceable.It's almost done. It's for my english class. Is it okay? :) Please correct if I have mistakes.



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3 Responses to “Please check my essay? :D?”

  1. fleawort says:

    Perfect

  2. vinestalk says:

    NO

  3. tetracoccous says:

    Specific notes in order as they appear include:”Has proven” not “has proved”Say “we can see today” not “as what we can see today” it sounds more authoritative.”In the society” is awkward. Why not say “in our society” or “in American society” or simply “in society”You say that they play a major role in society and education, but how? Tell us who uses computers, how classes use them, etc.”resulting in greater readership” not “resulting to”"greater readership” implies that more people read the article. That may be what you are trying to say, but textbooks are more or less mandatory. I think what you want to say is that they are more engaged. “Through eye-catching pictures…attracts more attention” is the same thing as the sentence before. Delete one of them.”Information can be presented in many different ways” is an entire idea. Add a period and then move onto the idea of computer-teaching. (You may also want to explain what exactly you mean by computer teaching).You cannot use conjunctions in formal writing! “There’s” should be written as “there is”As a stylistic note, don’t start a sentence with “also.” Combine the sentences and say “There are no restrictions on information that can be searched for and found on the internet. In addition all the information in a textbook, students can also find new, up to date research.” You need a new paragraph when you move from talking about learning styles to space and environmental concerns.You should also look into the assumption that the computer is more ‘green’ than a textbook. Trees are specifically raised to produce paper and replanted afterwards whereas computers run off of coal powered electricity. Coal is nonrenewable, dangerous to mine and, when burned, can cause acid rain hundreds of miles away. You should have a short third paragraph about why people prefer textbooks over computers. Information in textbooks has been rigorously reviewed to ensure accuracy where as you can say anything on the internet. Books are also easier to read, can be highlighted, and are more portable and durable than a computer. Finally, you can never replace the face to face interaction with live teachers.