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Can you correct this? French to English please xD?

hi, i’m trying to send a message in french to a guy, but my elementaire 4 is not enough to make such a difficult sentence.. in english:”but of course, we think men with long hair are really sexy, but if they use glasses too, that drives us (women) crazy *-*! at least to me (it […]

Can someone please read my essay and correct any errors?

Can someone please help me with my essay? 10pts? Thank you so much. .One of the most interesting people I’ve ever met is Vincent M. Spade. Vincent M. Spade is man who most people would consider mysterious because of his attire. Although he lives an ordinary life, his job as a spy makes him stand […]

Is this french essay correct?

Original:Hello my name is *my name*. I am 14 years old. My birthday is 8th november. I live in torquay with my mum, alison and my dad, malcolm. My parents are separated. I have no brothers or sisters. We have three small black cats called Shadow, Tilly and Muzzy. my mther is average with red […]

Can someone check my french essay introduction and correct any mistakes, please helpp! thankyouu!?

Bonjour j’mappelle shannon et j’ai trieze ans et mon anniversaire est le dix-sept decembre. Mon college s’appelle bridgewater. C’est un college de taille moyenne situe a liverpool. C’est pas mal mais je pense que l’ecole as assez enneyuex. Mon college est assez moderne.

Choose the correct way to write the underlined portion of the following sentence:?

“A decision was reached” to tear down the building. a.A decision was reached b.A decision was decided c.It was decided to d.The commissioners decided e. We made a decision 2. “Jennifer worked in a hospital last summer, which may be her career choice.” a. Jennifer worked in a hospital last summer, which may be her […]

I had to write an essay for a mid-term..can someone help correct my rough draft?..?

B.F.Skinner(Burrhus Frederic Skinner)was born March 20, 1904, in the small Pennsylvania town of Susquehanna. His father was a lawyer, and his mother a strong and intelligent housewife. His upbringing was old-fashioned and hard-working. Burrhus was an active, unconstrained boy who enjoyed the outdoors. His cultivation was of the old ways and hard working. The tragic […]

Is a Former Bush Administration Chief Of Staff Correct For Calling Former VP Cheney “Evil”?

Lawrence Wilkerson, Colin Powell’s former chief of staff, wrote an essay on the Washington Note last evening slamming Cheney’s fearmongering. Wilkerson calls Cheney “evil” and says his detainee policies were only “assisting” terrorists:Cheney went on to say in his McLean interview that “Protecting the country’s security is a tough, mean, dirty, nasty business. These are […]

Can someone help me out? Grammar help for essay. Please correct and revise the SECOND SENTENCE.?

“A growing amount of women and children from Vietnam are trafficked to South Asian countries such as Cambodia, Thailand, and China. A large percentage of whom would be sexually exploited, some voluntarily and involuntarily, the latter moreso. “

Please correct my essay?

Topic: How to be safe if you go mountain climbingWe all like playing sports, especially extreme sports which give us a lot of happiness and excitement. in my opinion mountain climbing is one of these exciting sports. However, we must be careful because all sports of these kind can be risky and put our life […]

Please help me correct it~URGENT!?

Topic:Getting advice from friends of an older age would be more valuable than from friends your own age.My essay:There is a growing awareness that human beings need to be interdependent, not independent in this society. Any discussion about this problem would inevitably involves we need help or advice from others. In most of case, as […]